Comments for Renuzzle's blog http://renuzzle.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Wed, 05 Mar 2008 15:20:58 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Video Blog on Oscars by mohawkonline http://renuzzle.wordpress.com/2008/02/24/video-blog-on-oscars/#comment-6 mohawkonline Wed, 05 Mar 2008 15:20:58 +0000 http://renuzzle.wordpress.com/2008/02/24/video-blog-on-oscars/#comment-6 Hi Michael, Good post. Enjoyed your picks and the class especially enjoyed the fact that you were right about most? :) Next time try and amp up your tone a bit.. remember 'no monotone'... and have some fun with it. Good job on the tags, description - the headline could use some work. Remember - the title is your 'headline'.. the description is your 'lead in paragraph' and your tags are how people will find you and your video. They deserve as much thought and consideration as your actual entry. 7/9 Roz Hi Michael,

Good post. Enjoyed your picks and the class especially enjoyed the fact that you were right about most? :)

Next time try and amp up your tone a bit.. remember ‘no monotone’… and have some fun with it.

Good job on the tags, description – the headline could use some work.

Remember – the title is your ‘headline’.. the description is your ‘lead in paragraph’ and your tags are how people will find you and your video. They deserve as much thought and consideration as your actual entry.

7/9

Roz

]]> Comment on Tribute to Heath Ledger by mohawkonline http://renuzzle.wordpress.com/2008/01/23/tribute-to-heath-ledger/#comment-5 mohawkonline Mon, 04 Feb 2008 17:51:58 +0000 http://renuzzle.wordpress.com/2008/01/23/tribute-to-heath-ledger/#comment-5 Hi Michael! Well done on the social networking assignment. Marks off: You forgot to bookmark sites on del.icio.us! Good job. 7.5/9 Hi Michael!

Well done on the social networking assignment.

Marks off: You forgot to bookmark sites on del.icio.us!

Good job.

7.5/9

]]> Comment on Tribute to Heath Ledger by mohawkonline http://renuzzle.wordpress.com/2008/01/23/tribute-to-heath-ledger/#comment-4 mohawkonline Mon, 28 Jan 2008 15:59:02 +0000 http://renuzzle.wordpress.com/2008/01/23/tribute-to-heath-ledger/#comment-4 Hi Michael! Good work. Nice to hear your opinion coming through! A few comments: -Always check your spelling. Easiest mark you'll ever get! -Blogroll is missing. That was worth 2 marks. -Feel free to discuss why you feel the way you do. I get a sense that you had a great respect for Heath as an actor but I don't know why. Good work! 7/10 Roz Hi Michael!

Good work. Nice to hear your opinion coming through!

A few comments:

-Always check your spelling. Easiest mark you’ll ever get!
-Blogroll is missing. That was worth 2 marks.
-Feel free to discuss why you feel the way you do. I get a sense that you had a great respect for Heath as an actor but I don’t know why.

Good work!

7/10

Roz

]]> Comment on Radiohead and the Music Industry by mohawkonline http://renuzzle.wordpress.com/2008/01/22/radiohead-and-the-music-industry/#comment-3 mohawkonline Wed, 23 Jan 2008 13:34:44 +0000 http://renuzzle.wordpress.com/2008/01/22/radiohead-and-the-music-industry/#comment-3 Hey Mike, Great work! That was a good conversational style post on a hot button topic. A few links to the site of 'Brand New' and Radiohead would have made it even better! Keep that in mind for your next assignment. Well done! Roz Hey Mike,

Great work! That was a good conversational style post on a hot button topic. A few links to the site of ‘Brand New’ and Radiohead would have made it even better! Keep that in mind for your next assignment.

Well done!

Roz

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